Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.
~ Novalis
~ Novalis
In November, I am continuing to participate in the Two
Pages-a-Day writing challenge. And I
must have been abducted by aliens who replaced my brain with rocks, because I’m
also doing NaNoWriMo for the first time.
Someone get this girl a drink!!
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ever judge a book by
its cover or its opening paragraph.
That goes double for a
poetry collection.
Reviewing fiction is sadly
easy these days: if the author uses their,
they’re, and there correctly,
they deserve a Pulitzer.
Poetry is an entirely
different animal.
The Soul
of the Poet
All writers bleed
through their pens, but poets have an elusive magic running in their veins. Words that seem stern and unshakeable become
soft and yielding when placed in the arms of a poem.
What is stilted and indecipherable
to one reader, is stark and emotional to another.
Its very subjectivity is what makes poetry so accessible and interesting. The meaning changes like light through the trees.
Iit also makes it
damn difficult to review.
Adventure,
Love, and Airplanes
When I first picked up
my ARC of Adventure, Love, and Airplanes by R. A.
Friedl, I read the first poem and put it aside for a week. I thought, Oh my God; another collection of pious blah blah blah in verse form.
I’m so not the person to read this right
now. Why didn’t I review this during a
non-drama, non-PMS week!?
But an honest review
was requested, so an honest review I would to give, come hell or empty
high-ball glass.
So I picked it up
again. That first poem still made my
not-so-inner cynic roll her eyes, but I kept reading.
And was immediately
body-slammed by some impressive word play.
God’s
Bullshit
I think Mr. Friedl hid this little gem on
purpose. It attacks like a vampire ~
silent and sudden. The repetition of the
line
I’m tired of His bullshitAnd I’m tired of His games
put me in mind of a villanelle. It provided a steady rhythm throughout the
poem, which is about a man trying to find his way, waiting for Heavenly
guidance that never comes. God’s silence
angers him, and he rages at Him
I’m gonna raise my nothing voiceAgainst the empty, nothing void.
Call me a passive-aggressive snit, but I love
this poem because it would shock and offend my mother and a couple of church
lady-types I know. In their narrow
world, you live, work, and accept without question, everything that comes.
Maybe that actually works for some people,
although I think it’s more a defensive mechanism than piety. But it certainly does not work for me. Nor does it for Friedl, it seems.
This anger, this frustration ~ it’s real, raw. And God is big enough to take
it. I read this and picture God as
Morpheus.
Bring it on, mortal!!
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My only critique is that some lines work too
hard to rhyme. The raw emotion in this
poem lends itself to free verse. Lines
like
I’m told to silence and to sitHis designs, they are so infinite
broke up the pounding rhythm Friedl had set in
the first stanza. Other than that, I wanted to say Oohrah! when I finished this poem. It is hands down my favorite.
Paying
off a Student Loan
I have one word to describe this poem:
brilliant. Don’t read the explanation,
just read the title and then the poem.
The word painting is vivid.
Which brings me to my second critique: I’m not
fond of the journal-like entries before
each poem. Personally, I like to read a
poem without the hindrance of the poet’s thoughts and explanations. I’m still interested in what emotions the
poet is trying to convey, but let me experience that first sip of inky wine on
my own. Then share your thoughts at the
end if you like.
Stumbling
This one was perfect. Favorite lines
Through thicken thornsThinking throughThoughts ill-born
Second
Impression
Greater kicker at the end that reminds us that
not all stereotypes are real. I laughed out loud because I've experienced this.
Buried
Treasure
I love visiting ancient cemeteries. The craftsmanship and love (or at least
social obligation) that went into carving the headstones is fascinating to
me. Friedl looks at all the lives long
gone and muses
As we lay to restIn casket chestsA wealth of lessons learned.
The best thing about reading and reviewing Friedl’s poetry? No misspellings and no incorrectly used words. My inner snarky editor thanks you, Robert.
And I look forward to reading more of your
poetic journey in the future.
Oremus pro invicem,
~ Mikaela
I received
an ARC so I could write this review. Adventure,
Love, and Airplanes is available for .99 at Amazon. I was not paid for this review.
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